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you smell like a white washing cloth
  in the hands of my beautician
              sometimes I don't recognise you
      and sometimes you are just too far

then I have to have her hands
      reminding me of how delicate the contour
              of my own chin is
                then at least I have a reference point
          at least I know what it should feel like
 
you feel like a white washing cloth
          in the hands of my beautician
  it feels warm and familiar
        it makes me sink into the place with no time
              and after the make up is gone
  I don't feel more naked in that presence

you smell like a white washing cloth
        in the hands of my beautician
                      and I don't if I met you yet
2014-04-16 16:26
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2022-04-02 05:48
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2015-09-21 02:54
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almost looked good, but wtf is "you smell like a white washing cloth"
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2014-04-19 18:01
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Riddle me this...

  :) well. this got me thinking about my reference points, and they have all changed and evolved their definitions in the process:)
  I mean, in the process of stumbling over ''you smell like a white washing cloth '' thrice - suffocating under the above-mentioned cloth with some additional cotton pads clogging my throat (kind of lethal extras from your beautician, I guess:), I finally opted for the DEATH rather than the BELOVED one. However, I would really appreciate unveiling the true meaning  of the poem in case I am wrong:)

In general, despite certain female glamorous mannerism in the settings, the "white cloth" symbol/motive is more than ample with meaning in the rites of life: birth, love and death. I'd say, the intriguing juxtaposition worked for the author's purpose.

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