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Not to make love
In front of peoples' children
Not to fall into the sun
Unless you know the religion
Crying out loud
Like never before
Unleash the angelic status
In front of all the faces
Become one of your
Dreamed races
Don't you try to fake yourself
Somebody could see you
Being inside you
Like a mirror
Showing you your skin
Someone could feel you
More than you do
While sitting on the top
Of the disabled moon
Your wild child is trying
To loose the silver spoon
This time is not to wait
But to make an arrangement
To the God and say
You did your best
But now it's my turn
To choose the way
2012-10-28 18:21
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2012-11-01 18:25
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And yes, it stings! Some crossover hints in the poem make the interpretation ground a bit quaky:) thus pregnant with ambiguity and possible misjudgement... True, duplicity of human nature is the reason enough to affront the God... Nicely crafted, though:)
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