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2010-01-22 12:16

Aš supratau kaip pokštą: tu compasas, o pasaulio šalys tavo mylimosios. Tai man ir romantiška ir linksma. Tik tada pabaigą reikėjo kitą pavaryt, pvz.: i'm in love and no stess. Tada būtų be tos slogios nuotaikos ;-)

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2010-01-06 18:15

Lietaus žmogus

Nice, short ant to the point

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2009-12-03 22:05

carandache

appreciate that.
it was born in the middle of the night like that. no touches. so.

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2009-12-03 20:35

Vincentas Starikovas

Author, I'd correct the first "there" to "here". Though, a compass on a mountain, who points out where he's been.
It lacks - what most of my works, weeps, lack - something soul shredding, attention grabbing, shoe rocking. Otherwise - something easy to remember, romantic-sad, and to-be-said while intoxicating one's body on a roof at full moon. Go whatever-poet society.

GooRoo,
Love is east, west,
south and could be north.
To be short -
The Globe,
All over.

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2009-12-03 17:46

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you will love again. I'm not trying to say - tommorow or next month. but you will.

again = a gain

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2009-12-03 17:40

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it means magnetic field is too weak. for now.

don't be sad about that - emotional magnitude is not constant. even for the darkest and the most despairing ones.

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2009-12-03 17:26

carandache

yours says north.
mine can't catch any vibes. anymore.

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2009-12-03 17:14

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keliaujantis pieštukas, kuris laiko save kompasu :)

maybe love always - north?