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Can we talk about something except love?
Oh it feels so sweet to me!
Can we talk about something except love?
Oh it could hardly be!

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We're talking every day
And we still have something to say
It's love love love!

Pretty words come from my mouth
They are warm like sun in south
About love love love!

We gonna be together
Love will last forever
Our love love love!

Cause girl can lift you off the ground
When you feel it make it loud:
You're my love love love!

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2022-04-02 16:37

Passchendaele

Don't give up on your first girl-friend --- you're still on her mind.

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2009-11-09 21:57

Vincentas Starikovas

I am sick of low quality poems. One of your poems had a original, if we can call it, idea. Well, more of a "girls give flowers to guys" thing, not an idea, really. But this. This is not very bad, but it's bad. Even if you are stripping , so that everyone would see your emotions. But they are too common and , at least, the creations ,that those your emotions are followed by, are poor in language, and sophistication. They are not minimalistic - you just can't perform better. Or you don't put effort. DOn't get too hype, if someone said a good word. Stop writing. You can, I know it. (..I would too, but I have this thing inside me,that craves for intellectual work and self-actualization..)

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2009-11-09 19:02

Čiumodanas

Ačiū už vertima
Galiu pasakyt- drąsus esi nusirenginėti del savo jausmų
Bet tai yra naturalūs jausmai, kuriuos aš marinu dėl tau, broli, žinomų priežasčių.
O kūryba- aukštumoj
Vertinu labai žavingai
Iš dešimt balų- devyni

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