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On the sunday night
Of the mid of september
Bright falling star
Crashed to the land and
Gave to us a wonder -
An incredible boy.
He grew up like the others,
But that's not a point.
Oh, such special heart!
It's so fine to be near,
But if to talk of his life -
Faith is sometimes unfair.

I've tried to be good,
I've tried to be kind,
You told me that I'm an angel,
And I thought - I can fly.
But why do I get no self-satisfaction?
Why do I pray without any relief?
It seems like I give out my lifetime
To every man with exception oh... of me.

You used to see me smilin'
And to think - He's all right!
But don't you get to the meaning
That there's something behind?
Don't take me to your world,
As I'm building one on my own -
The only dream I have and live for,
So very little, but it's still the hope.

Oh, I don't have nothing more to live for.
Oh, I must be there in any way, anyhow...

Hey you, don't try to give in!
Believe your heart is sayin'!
Hey boy, why don't you dare to fly away
And reach your destiny!
Now nothing gonna stop you - break free!
Don't care what people think of!
Your life - you're one who'll make it.
So take your steps
And stars will lead you to fantasies.
Come on, boy, and turn them into reality!

The stars are bright (and you've got luck),
I see my aim (and you don't stop),
Let's make this way (we're almost there)
And take the prize as dreams are here.
2009-07-15 22:09
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2022-04-02 16:58
Passchendaele
The Lithuanian way.
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2010-11-10 15:49
Nepataisomas romantikas
Man patinka, kad tu rašai apie įprastinius žmogiškus jausmus ir klausimus paprastai, be užuolankų ir gilių išvedžiojimų, kurie dažnai baigiasi arba visišku kūrinio nesupratimu arba nusišnekėjimu. Šaunuolis, taip toliau! :)))
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2010-01-26 10:57
Plogutits 518
:)Nu neko tesuprantu, bet ma šviesus toks atroda i dėl tą pradrįstu pavertint biškia vansi:DDD
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2009-10-25 15:49
Vincentas Starikovas
The first lines really got me intrigued - 'oh, maybe somthing epic..". But after - damn the angels - the content got personal and teenagish. Still, for this kind of poetry - rather good.
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2009-09-28 23:40
Intriganto
Daaaaamn. I almost fell asleep.
Anyway, as a song it's good.
Good luck! :)
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2009-07-22 17:39
van
van
skurdoka kalba. cia minusas

nu siaip o ka, istorija ir tiek
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2009-07-20 17:54
agnie6ka
Pretty good...first 3 was \"tasty\" :) but the 5... (I had to concenrtate that not fall asleep) nevermind
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2009-07-17 08:20
kukutis
Malonu, kad išdrįsai įdėti. Na, juk žinai, man patiko. :)
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2009-07-16 17:43
25 kadro nėra
I\'m so high - so I can kiss the sky. I don\'t want to be mean - but Your poem is quit boring - just too much bare rhymes and images.

good luck! :)
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2009-07-15 22:24
Aeron
Ir vėl geri žodžiai dainai. Yra keletas stiliaus klaidų pirmame stulpelyje, jei nori, galiu parašyt žinute, nesinori komentaruose mėsinėt.
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