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Have you ever seen a sinking boat?
People hopeless in it asking for mercy and help
With eyes full of salty water we call tears
Knowing that there's only a slight chance they'll survive

Have you ever known a child
Who's afraid of dieing but doesn't want live either
Who has no parents, no one to look after
No future, no home?

Have you ever killed a butterfly?
The one that lives no longer then a day
Why should you be given more than that
If there's creatures on earth
Who deserves it more than you

The world is full of unfairness
Even the nature becomes an enemy sometimes
And where's the justice?
Where's the unseen
The one they call it God
2009-06-26 23:23
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2022-04-02 17:01
Passchendaele
Smoke weed. Every atom-nano-bacto second of your life.
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2009-10-25 16:12
Vincentas Starikovas
Oh'cmon. Be a little older - why God has to be fair, and eveyone should get what he deserves?

Verdict - few feet ahead of most people who write poetry in English here.

What you need - to contemplate.
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2009-09-29 00:01
Intriganto
God will punish you for this! :D
Only kiddin'.
C'mon, don't be so sceptic.
It's not so bad to live here. Everyone has his destiny. Even the butterfly in your poem. If it has to be killed, it means that it has.
That's all I wanted to say.


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2009-06-30 15:35
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With eyes full of salty water we call tears - crying


kam daugiazodziaut? geriau maziau bet prasmingiau
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2009-06-29 21:26
agnie6ka
It will never be fair...maybe there is a wee bit problem with a rhythm but idea is not bad...if I have a chance to vote I would give 3,2+ (I like the end)
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2009-06-27 19:30
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*dying.
Na nežinau, galima ir
subtiliau pamakaluot.
Nothing special.
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