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In cold day of fall
She was next to me
Divinity has ran unto my call
No more blessed I could be

As cold wind was rushing to freeze my heart
She embraced me
That very second all fell apart
Nothing better could happen to me

One thing was for sure as ever
And it wasn't good for me
Nothing good can last forever
Not even warming embrace of thee

Was my attemp so vain?
Can nothing be my gain?

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2007-10-06 17:08

Demonic Poet

And what happens if the 1 time out of 10 is the right one? Doesn't that make us lost and confused, that we have so many wrongs?

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2007-10-05 20:33

kondensofkė

9 times out of 10 our hearts just get dissolved
but 1 time out of 10 everything is perfect for us all.

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2007-10-05 15:40

Demonic Poet

Gerai istikruju, galejai labiau ta jausma zodziais isreiksti, paastrinti jausma. Bet tik tiek, menkas as kritikas, kad cia stumciau ;)

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2007-10-05 15:16

Inferis_

Not actually if you're talking about periodicity of posting my works.
P.S. Gali rašyti ir lietuviškai, jei kolkas dedu vien anglų kalba rašytus savo darbus nereiškia kad nesuprantu lietuvių kalbos.

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2007-10-05 14:58

Elfegas Sinušas

If the omission of the articles (the, a) is deliberate, let it be. Nobody cares so much, I guess. But aren't you involved in a machine-like-printing manner, my fella?

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