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How happyness that filled us so securily,
How the feeling shined so purely.
Sharing this joyful moment in between us,
But we have left all this in the past,
We've become two separated tears,
Which could have been on one chin - mine or yours...
How we joined and how it was together,
Is how it ended and how it could be

Saving everything for that rainy day
And I guess that day hast just come...

So many hopes were put,
So many sweet moments imagined,
Had hoped you will free me
From my place so negative within myself,
But I've come to find,
We're not one piece...
But I've never expected
The ending which is such.
Imagine if it has ended,
The other way than this!
Imagine all those moments,
We could have spent!
Sharing dying thoughts of ours!
Seems to me like I'm a dreamer,
Though I hope someday you'll join me...

How come this fell apart,
Whom to blame, but hopes and imagination:
Ending at the different direcionts,
Will we join in again...
The hope has died so freely,
As fast as flame between us.
Will this join us?
I hope... Someday
2007-04-13 17:25
Į mėgstamiausius įsidėjo
Šią informaciją mato tik svetainės rėmėjai. Plačiau...
 
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2007-10-11 12:40
Elfegas Sinušas
Again too many dots. Use dashes or what.
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2007-04-13 19:56
Skiante
Koks griežtas(?) vertinimas,man šio autoriaus kūryba visai "praeina" ir nieko blogo aš šiame darbe nematau,galbūt prarastosios kartos atstovai turėtų būti šiek tiek atlaisdesni...
Sėkmės.
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2007-04-13 17:45
A Puokas
Was ist das, kad man ausiai cut off daro tokie kaip "The ending which is such", "happyness" "how it was together, Is how it ended" "someday" ir kt.. Išglušau, nekitaip.

Sincerely,

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