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Makers make sense of rhetoric.
Knowledge is more than you think.
Baking bread is my fetishism;
My escape from the deadly plague.

We both end up being 'ologists'
To invent heritage from godly remains.
Do you still believe in your goddesses?
This is more than the question of faith.

We make sense of false and  fake politics
While they’re tasting their lives as saints;
This is not just the plain rhetoric
Which goes on and on, and then fades.

Lets all become archaeologists!
And invent things from remains!
My knowledge buys only your knowledge;
Let this be our stock for exchange.

When you talk again to your goddesses,
Try listening to what they will say…
Mine only blab on about politics
And sell their claims on eBay.

Next time you talk to them, honestly,
Say what you always wanted to say:
That you will become an archaeologist
To reinvent fair (trading) gods and true saints.
2015-03-04 17:05
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2015-03-05 18:26
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Even though I'm here for getting critique and I do learn something from it, it could've been presented differently. Maybe I have a different understanding of science, philosophy, politics, religion etc., but then again, where I find absolute and correct definitions to what it is and how we need to interpret it. The comment I was given from WRT is very much subjective, so is my poem. So what?         
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2015-03-05 11:23
wrawr
You don't deserve a poem from me, sorry. Jokes aside, you must not be particulary good in English to think that this is a proper way of formulation. Rudeness? More like honesty. No idea why do people prefer a polite liar to an honest but rude person.
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2015-03-04 21:14
Mikė Lilikė
WRT will never be excused for such rudeness, won't he? How does he know about your knowledge? He must learn to keep a civil tongue. Trust me, English does work that way and a lot of other ways, and I really like your idea and rhymes. Can you write your next poem about the cocky chicken, please? ;)
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2015-03-04 18:04
wrawr
THAT'S NOT HOW ENGLISH WORKS. The formulation is horrible. Anyways, the idea, per se is just, silly. Rather, you have no knowledge whatsoever in few important fields; science, philosophy, politics to name a few. This is just a biased popular opinion and a horrible attempt to write a poem. Sorry.
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