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Tremendous amount of wolves appeared suddenly in the dense forest near the Vancouver town bridge. It was going to be quite a lovely day, except that nothing lovely happened yet. Evening for those dreadful wild animals was going to be as usual- searching for food and shelter. And in the middle of nothing one wolf howled silently- it was the sign, that this particular wolf found food, an already dead elk on the dawn of a fest. And this could mean only one thing, that the supper and the main action is going to happen right here. Right now.

The spot of this supper, including the wild animals together with a victim will not be discussed. The story is only going to cover one aspect of an action, which is about to happen. It is crucial to mention, that the guests of this event eating the elk, the big brother of these wild forests, did not have any particular intentions to kill somebody. It wasn't an act of body desecration. Simply an act of instincts, the desire to gorge and overeat the others.

So it all began. The Fur of the elk was torn. It came out, that firstly some organs such as eye balls were chosen as the ones to fight for. Now it was time for flesh. The flesh of that animal came out to be still juicy and tasty. Not to mention the creamy skin pieces, nails and other remains of the elk. Lastly the Bloodstain was the only evidence of this natural action. The artist could call this bloodstain the inner expression of instincts, except that for most of human beings it would associate more with the spot of crime scene. The scene, which was arranged spontaneously and happened in 15 minutes without any particular reason on the lovely day, except it wasn't quite lovely.
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2013-04-28 22:15
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Kažkaip nesiskaito kelios vietos:

1) "that this particular wolf found food"... Particular.
2) "an already dead elk" as opposed to finding a soon to be dead elk?
3) "that the supper and the main action is going to"... main action? It's not a legal document is it? :)
4) "The story is only going to cover one aspect of an action, which is about to happen" Gal net išimt vertėtų.

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