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Nepataisomas romantikas Nepataisomas romantikas

To my only one

Šis kūrinys matomas tik autoriaus namuose


It is so nice when you call out 'baby'!
It's so good to be loved...
It feels exciting to have 'the reason'!
It's so fine to take care
And no need to be sorry
You're the only one in my plans
Let's spend time in fairy story
Let's do it in romance

***

Night is rushing to my home-town
And I'm not set down
Cause you have occupied my dark side
Tonight even moon is not on her own...
As you have said: 'hey, darling,
I'm a cream on a top! '
'How can you be that charming?
You have been
For so long time free
As you been always on spot... '

Sitting on the roof skys
Are so clear
And sounds like the coolness
Has no fear
But it melts in the strong embrace
That don't want to face us
Anymore...
Stars are painting our life way
Birds are drinking a dewfall of the late May
So we don't get wet
And we replay them with a flash-light
So they may stay
All night
Long...
2010-08-16 16:13
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2010-08-17 10:30
Tommis
Labai nevienodo ilgio eilutės kiek trukdo malonaus skaitymo sklandumui. Šiaip, visai gerai.
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2010-08-16 17:02
Atavizmas
Too much words, too little poetry. The first stropha feels fake. The second one is rather good. I don't give a f*** for the third. Thanks anyway, it was kinda interesting, huh.
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