romantiškaThose moments in that place
I can't believe, eyes lied or was a dream?
To see the cloud higher than stars,
Can it be true? stars were blue.
It must be dream, cloud was red.
So beautiful
Does the heaven colored much?
Or me stupid to think in such?
I don't care who believe it
I saw it and i did live it
Unluckily
Time was short had to leave it
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2010-04-23 23:10
Blogas komentaras Rodyti?
2010-04-24 10:35
what that place? should be some kind of mystics and fantastics - red clouds and blue stars, like in disco :)
Does the heaven colored much? - this line goes well with the title. can be some interpretations, what about it was: after drug use, or love, or idea for painting.. or something else.. very simple, but somehow intresting, sure need to search for some more meaningfull words itself to express imagination or main idea. 3 |
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